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Becky Swank's avatar

Oh my gawd this ripped my heart out.

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Sara Szatmary's avatar

In a good way though, right?

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Becky Swank's avatar

Yes!!! I want to be brave enough to come undone.

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Floor Waffles's avatar

Amazing how fast you got us to this moment. Absolutely love this line, “lips once pressed closed to wobble.”

I especially like that it’s being narrated. Who is this person saying all this? Really adds a layer to it that makes me want to keep reading.

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Sara Szatmary's avatar

Thank you for the kind words!

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